We are going to the beach this Friday. Wait until after our trip to write this journal. If you aren't going to the beach, choose another great place to visit and write about that.Choose one of these topic sentences and write a complete paragraph.1) Corona Del Mar is a wonderful place for many reasons.2) Corona Del Mar is not a great place for several reasons
Corona beach is a wonderful place for many reasons. First, the sea is very beautiful . There are a lot of beach in California, but I think the Corona beach is the best. The water is clear , and we can see many fishes. Second,the view is wonderful. The sunset view and palm trees make a good combination. Finally, there are also a lot of children. They are very tiny and cute. For these reason,the Corona beach is a wonderful place.
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You make a good argument! I agree with you. Corona Del Mar is a great beach. However, I like surfing so I prefer different beaches. Newport Beach has bigger waves. Corona Del Mar is more of a family beach. This is why you saw so many little children.
Have you ever been to other beachs? Maybe Corona beach is not the best~Next time, let's go to other beachs and have fun.
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